乐趣

罗志海

乐趣


屏前屏后相思不断
网上网中趣味无穷
正道行来颇为感慨
浮华淡去开始从容

格律体新诗 ● 八绝罗志海著译
第11286首对联体诗 2021年1月17日


Pleasure

Continued lovesickness in front of and behind the screen
Endless fun on and in the internet
Glitz is faded and begins to calm down
It's quite emotional to walk on the right track

Metric New Poetry ● Eight Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
The 11,286th Two Pairs of Couplets, 1/17/2021

郑贤永

构思新颖，铺陈有序，情景交融，运笔自如，转结有味，蕴藉耐品！余味悠长。

郑贤永

文辞隽永，文采斐然，美韵悠长，词句畅达！寄意深长！领略诗家风采!