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 楼主| 发表于 2018-7-9 05:49 | 显示全部楼层
春秋情

风凉秋月黄菊瘦
情暖春天绿柳娜
挥洒轻烟留客雨
搭乘好友顺风车


Feelings Of Spring And Autumn

Wind is cold
the autumn moon and the yellow chrysanthemums are thin

Feelings warm in spring
the green willows are charming

Sprinkle the light smoke
the rain staying guests

I take a ride of my good friend

7/8/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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耕云牧鹤

天寒顿感水凉指
夜尽犹思酒暖心
牧鹤松山灵隐径
耕云珠海梦游人


Ploughs Clouds And Herds Cranes

The weather is cold
suddenly I feel
water cold of fingers
At the late night
still I think of wine
warms my heart

Ploughs clouds
in the pearl sea
a sleepwalking man
He herds cranes
in the pine mountain
on the spirit hidden path

7/9/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-7-13 06:09 | 显示全部楼层
秋雁陣

水漲浸山腳
霧開架拱橋
秋枝紛亂禿
雁陣緩悠逃


Formation Of Flying Swan Goose In Autumn

Water rose
the mountain foot dipping

Fog evaporated
bridging an arch bridge

The autumn branches
were bald quickly

Formation of flying swan goose
one after another away flew

7/12/2018對聯體 ● 五絕羅志海著譯
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Five Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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The 6,442th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2018-7-18 09:17 | 显示全部楼层
意蕴心声

桃花两岸妩妩
春水一池粼粼
酒后心声真我
诗中意蕴宜人


Implication And Heart Sounds

The peach blossoms are charming
on both banks
A pool of the spring water
is sparkling

After drinking
heart sounds
show a true me
Implication is pleasant
in the poetry

7/17/2018对联体 ● 六绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Six Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-7-19 19:42 | 显示全部楼层
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愁丝泪渍

愁丝一把剪不断
泪渍满襟洗未白
遍地黄花秋本性
千年铁骨柏胸怀


Sad Silks And Tear Stains


A handful sad silks
weren’t cut
Tear stains full on the bosom part of clothes
weren’t washed clean

The yellow flowers all over the field
the nature of autumn
Millennium iron bones
the bosom of cypress

7/18/2018對聯體七絕羅志海著譯
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-7-22 10:09 | 显示全部楼层
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往事

白驹过隙,人生弹指匆匆过
绿水泛波,往事伤心缓缓流
悠奕浮萍,浪荡荷塘同沐雨
逍遥野鹤,云游桂殿共吟秋


The Past

Time passes quickly
like a white pony's shadow
across a crevice
life fillips
passes hurriedly

The green water ripples
the past in sadness
flows slowly

The elegant and beautiful duckweed
flutters in the lotus pool
bathing rain together

Unfettered wild cranes
visit the Laurel Palace
chant autumn together

7/21/2018对联体 ● 十一绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-7-24 06:18 | 显示全部楼层
粉荷翠鸟

云散才知山顶近
林幽更喜涧泉清
粉荷朵朵回眸赏
翠鸟声声支枕聆


The Rosy Lotus Blossoms And The Kingfisher

Clouds dispersed
I just knew near the mountain top
Forest was secluded
in the gulley
I more loved the clear spring

Every rosy lotus blossoms
I look back enjoying
Sounds of the kingfisher
I elbowed on the pillow listening

7/23/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-7-28 14:30 | 显示全部楼层
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晨露晚风

晨露润花香淡淡
晚风扬柳影纤纤
云舒云卷云弥涧
月落月升月满园


The Morning Dew And The Evening Wind

The morning dew moistening flowers
fragrance is light
The evening wind fluttering willows
shadows are slender

Clouds scatter
clouds mass
clouds pervade ravine
Moon goes down
moon rises
moon full in the garden

7/27/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-7-30 09:24 | 显示全部楼层
迎风醉柳

霜凌雪辱梅瑰丽
柏翠松青志挺拔
兰韵迎风摇玉影
雨溪醉柳赏春花


Facing Wind And Gets Drunk In Willows

Frost bullying
snow insulting
the plum blossoms are magnificent

Their ambitions are high and straight
pines are green
cypresses are emerald

The orchid rhymes facing wind
shake their jade shadows

The rain stream enjoys the spring flowers
gets drunk in willows

7/29/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-8-3 10:27 | 显示全部楼层
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花落水流

昨宵月亮盈盈满
此际心头郁郁愁
花落无声虽有怨
水流急逝不回头


Flowers Fell And Water Flowed

The moon last night
was round and limpid
In my heart
the depressed sadness
at this time

Flowers fell silently
although with grudge
not coming back
water flowed fast

8/3/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-8-9 07:11 | 显示全部楼层
古今天下

醉卧青山聆暮雨
闲行野径看朝云
寸心可以量天下
茅舍适宜论古今


The Ancient And Modern World

Drunken to lie
in the green hill
listened to the rain
in the evening
Leisure to walk
on the wild path
watched the clouds
in the morning

An inch heart
can measure the world
A cottage
suits to comment
the ancient and modern things


8/7/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-8-14 09:26 | 显示全部楼层
冬春

春苑梅红香染梦
冬山月皎韵清心
平平淡淡长流水
健健康康活跃人


Winter And Spring

Garden in the spring
plum blossoms are red
their fragrances dye our dreams

In the winter mountain
moon is bright
rhymes clean our minds

The flowing water is long and peacefully
people are healthy and active

8/13/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-8-19 06:37 | 显示全部楼层
春风秋水

茫茫天地,三生难了情中事
滚滚江河,一语惊呆梦里魂
潇洒悠然,秋水半池两皓月
逍遥自在,春风满袖八闲云


The Spring Breeze And The Autumn Water

Between the vast heaven and earth
in the three lifetime
we hard to cut off love things
In the surging rivers
one word wakes up
souls in the dream

Leisurely and comfortably
the autumn water in half a pool
two bright moon
Free and unfettered
the spring breeze full of the sleeves
eight clouds leisurely

8/17/2018对联体 ● 十一绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-8-23 21:02 | 显示全部楼层
鍾情詩酒

采一縷蘭香釀酒
繪三叢竹影填詞
詩書一櫃清心醉
舞曲三支入夢癡


Love Poetry And Wine

I picked a wisp of the orchid fragrance
to make wine
I painted three clumps of bamboo shadows
to compose a lyrics to a piece of the given music

A bookcase of the poetic books
drunkenly and comfortably
Three pieces of the dance music
obsessed into the dream

8/22/2018對聯體 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-8-27 16:37 | 显示全部楼层
商贾渔樵

竹窗明亮清风静
梅韵飘香冽雪停
商贾吟诗铜臭味
渔樵对话海山情


Merchants, Fishermen And Woodcutters

The bamboo windows are bright
the cool breeze is quiet
The piercingly cold snow stops
the plum rhyme floats fragrance

Merchants chant poems
with the stink of money
Dialogue between fishermen and woodcutters
the feelings of the sea and mountains

8/26/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-8-31 09:32 | 显示全部楼层
春天

人间烟火山头月
梦里云霞垄上风
几点嫩芽春小小
千株细柳绿盈盈


Spring

Smoke and fire in the human world
moon above the mountain top
Pink clouds in the dream
wind through the ridge of field

A few tender buds
spring is small
A thousand slender willows
full of green

8/30/2018對聯體 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-9-12 09:52 | 显示全部楼层
诗韵

野渡风急山欲雨
危楼雾大水连天
诗吟日月三分醉
笔走龙蛇一纸闲


Rhyme

At the wild ferry
it wills rain in the mountain
wind is strong

Water connecting sky
in the high tower
the great frost

Trisection of drunken
chant poems
about moon and sun

A piece of paper is leisure
dragons and snakes
follow the writing brush


9/11/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-9-28 09:06 | 显示全部楼层
鱼跃

原上草
智多星
观鱼跃
聆鸟鸣


Fish Jumping

Grass in the grassland
The mastermind
Watch fish jumping
Listen to bird singing

9/27/2018对联体 ●三绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Three Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-10-8 08:54 | 显示全部楼层
蘭香燕語

三千水墨凝春色
一部鋼琴奏舞池
嫵媚蘭香蝴蝶夢
纏綿燕語柳枝詞


Orchid Aromas And Songs Of Swallows

A piano played
in the dancing floor
Three thousands of the water ink
gathered the spring colours

The touching songs of swallows
Lyrics of the Willow Branches
The dream of a butterfly
the enchanting orchid aromas


10/7/2018對聯體 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
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花果

小楼藏月色
深院锁春光
风弄梅花影
鸟尝荔果香


Flowers And Fruits

A small tower hid the moonlight
A deep court locked the spring scenery
Wind shook the shadows of the plum blossoms
A bird tasted the fruit fragrance of litchi

10/7/2018对联体 ● 五绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Five Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-10-13 06:19 | 显示全部楼层
欢舞

荼蘼架曙烟醉软
水榭檐雏燕呢喃
雨润桃红蝴蝶舞
风吹柳绿竹笋欢


Happily Dance

On the roseleaf raspberry trellis
dawn smoke is drunk and soft
On the eaves of the waterside pavilion
the young swallows twittering

Rain moistens peaches red
butterflies dancing
Wind blows willows green
bamboo shoots happy

10/12/2018對聯體 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-10-17 07:09 | 显示全部楼层
祥和

起死回生,鹤盗灵芝草
蓝天丽日,鸽衔橄榄枝
一渊清水,养星辰日月
半亩烟霞,收画卷诗词


Peace And Harmony

Make the dead come back to life
crane stealing lucid ganoderma
The blue sky and the bright sun
pigeon biting an olive branch

An abyss of the clear water
Raising sun, moon and stars
Half a mu of the clouds and smoke
collecting poems, lyrics and picture scrolls

10/16/2018对联体 ● 九绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Nine Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-10-23 11:09 | 显示全部楼层
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佛緣

萬事有因果
一生做勝緣
凝眸憐薄命
舉酒醉流年


Fate Of Buddhism

Everything has cause and effect
I do alms giving
in a lifetime

I gaze and pity
the unfortunate life

I lift a cup of wine
intoxicate the fleeting time

10/1/2018對聯體 ● 五絕羅志海著譯
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-10-24 20:43 | 显示全部楼层
学习

四野新风弹乐曲
一犁细雨润芽苞
春秋典故梦中读
现代诗篇案上抄


Study

A plough of drizzle
moistens buds
In the surrounding fields
the new wind plays music

Allusions of Spring and Autumn
in the dream
I read them
The modern poems
on the desk
I copy them

10/23/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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The 7,146th Two Pairs of Couplets
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灵魂

久闯江湖身手快
常吟诗句嘴巴甜
耕云牧月青山坳
雪魄冰魂赤脚仙


Souls

Long burst in the lakes and rivers
my hands are agile
Often chant verses
my mouth is fragrant

Ploughing clouds and grazing moon
in the col of the green mountain
Souls of the snow and ice
the barefoot Immortal

10/26/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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The 7,172th Two Pairs of Couplets

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场景

提串榆钱沽酒去
蘸些秋色画图来
心灵笔妙心思到
意惹情牵意境开


Scene

Carried a string of the elm leaves
went to buy wine

Dipped some autumn colors
came to paint a picture

The heart is clever
the pen is wonderful
the mind enters

The mood provokes
the feeling worries
the state is wide

10/30/2018對聯體 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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The 7,205th Two Pairs of Couplets
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情媚

三分快意听泉涌
一杖闲云陪我游
心底艳情无限媚
指尖旋律自然流


The Charming Love

With one-third of pleasure
I listened to spring gushing

A walking stick of the leisure cloud
accompanies me visiting

The romantic love in my innermost being
infinitely charming

On my fingertips
melody flows naturally

11/3/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第732首对联体诗
The 7,232th Two Pairs of Couplets

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生机勃勃

莺语初啼,三叠翠语柳浪处
春光乍泄,一米阳光诗窗前
清尘浊水,燕子矶头人瘦弱
空谷幽兰,玉箫声里月洁圆


Full Of Vigour

Twitters of orioles first sounded
three piles of the emerald twitters
on the place of the waves of the willows
The spring light just shone
a meter of the sunlight
in front of the window

In the empty valley the secluded orchids
in the jade fluting
moon was bright and round
The clear dust and turbid water
a person was thin
on the Swallow Stone

11/19/2018对联体 ● 十一绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7320首对联体诗
The 7,320th Two Pairs of Couplets

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山趣

相思兩地題紅葉
美夢一宵寄白雲
賞竹品花吟雅韻
觀松聽鳥訪賢人


Humour Mountain

I sent to the white clouds
one night of the sweet dreams
I inscribed a poem on the red leaf
lovesickness between two places

We enjoyed bamboos and flowers
chanted the elegant rhymes
We watched pines and listened to birds
visited the sages

12/1/2018對聯體 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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The 7,390th Two Pairs of Couplets

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