抚慰的心意

罗志海

抚慰的心意


千溪万苑，心旷神怡，春风乱点群芳谱
万岭千湖，天高气爽，秋雨闲淋碧桂园
左岸梅花，红情绿意，墨舞诗林留后裔
右江星月，玉骨冰心，案斟酒水敬先贤


格律体新诗 ● 十五绝罗志海著译
第11046首对联体诗 2020年11月29日



Soothing Minds


A thousand streams and ten thousands of gardens
relaxed and happy
and spring wind disorderly to point the group flower ranking list


Ten thousands of ridges and a thousand lakes
the sky is high and the weather fine
and the autumn rain leisurely to shed in the Country Garden Holdings


Plum blossoms on the Left Bank
red and green minds
wielding ink in the poetry forest to leave calligraphy to our descendants


Stars and moon in the Right River
jade bones and ice hearts
pouring out cups of wine on the table to respect our ancestors


Metric New Poetry ● Fifteen Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
The 11,046th Two Pairs of Couplets, 11/29/2020

郑贤永

含蓄蕴藉，韵味幽深，铺写动人，意韵悠扬，情景交融，诗情飘逸！

郑贤永

构思新颖，铺陈有序，情景交融，运笔自如，转结有味，蕴藉耐品！余味悠长。

郑贤永

结构自然，情怀幽婉，动静结合，生动入味。欣赏佳作！学习问好。