七绝《鲁拜集》新译其七

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七绝《鲁拜集》新译其七

春火邀君酒满壶，冬裳带悔弃全无。

流光过隙知难挽，奋翮穹苍尚在途。

英文原诗VII

Come, fill the Cup, and in the Fire of Spring

Your Winter-garment of Repentance fling:

The Bird of Time has but a little way

To flutter - and the Bird is on the Wing.

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