七绝《鲁拜集》新译其二十六

紫云生 · 发表于 2021-1-17 00:29

七绝《鲁拜集》新译其二十六

今生来世问诸贤，哲理滔滔若半仙。

笑柄贻人蜚语播，南山托体嘴封填。

英文原诗XXVI

Why, all the Saints and Sages who discuss'd

Of the Two Worlds so wisely - they are thrust

Like foolish Prophets forth; their words to scorn

Are scatter'd, and their Mouths are stopt with Dust.

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