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 楼主| 发表于 2019-8-2 14:18 | 显示全部楼层

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-8-2 14:18 | 显示全部楼层
景物

酒过三巡言喜跃
梅开二度雪消停
秋香窗外蝴蝶醉
风静池边云水清


Scenery

Plums bloomed two times
snow stopped
Utterances were joyful and enthusiastic
drank three rounds

The autumn fragrance outside the window
butterflies got drunk
On the poolside wind was quiet
the clear water and clouds

8/1/2019格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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The 8,852th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-8-31 08:57 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 罗志海 于 2019-8-31 09:02 编辑

激动

澎湃激情,琴彰礼乐通三界
沸腾热血,剑指江湖荡九州
感人肺腑,山挺脊梁扛日月
动我心弦,笔挥彩墨画春秋


Excitement

Surging passion
lute manifests music and rites
to the universe’s three divisions

Boiling blood
a sword points rivers and lakes
cleans up Nine States

Touch one deeply in the heart
a mountain rises its backbone up
to shoulder the moon and the sun

Move my heartstrings
a writing brush wields the colorful ink
to paint the autumn and the spring

8/30/2019格律体新诗 ● 十一绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8999首对联体诗
The 8,999th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-10-1 09:26 | 显示全部楼层
庆祝中华人民共和国成立七十周年!

寂烦之后

忧烦常在曲折处
寂寞多生午夜时
一枕莺声春润色
满园兰韵柳题词

Celebrate the Seventieth Anniversary of the founding of the People's Republic of China!

After Loneliness And Worry

Worry is often in a tortuous place
Loneliness more grows at midnight

Spring embellished, a pillow of sounds of orioles
Willow wrote an inscription, full in the garden, the orchid rhymes

Baijing Time 10/1/2019格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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The 9,117th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-12-16 10:01 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 罗志海 于 2021-3-4 07:34 编辑

深秋诗画

小荷圆露游鱼趣
衰草淡烟栖鸟愁
点点诗香惊朗月
浓浓墨色笑深秋


Poetry And Painting In The Deep Autumn

In withered grass and light smoke, perching birds worried
With interest of fish, small lotuses and round dews

The thick ink colour laughed at the deep autumn
Points of the poetry fragrances scared the bright moon

12/15/2019格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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The 9,201th Two Pairs of Couplets
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 楼主| 发表于 2019-12-22 15:53 | 显示全部楼层
交际

红尘设宴,招待五湖四海画家骚客
美酒登台,醉迷三友六姨死党亲人
山水婀娜,彩霞艳艳直击美女飘舞
风光秀丽,芽柳萌萌喜见红梅报春


Communication

The red dust gave a banquet
to entertain painters and poets
from five lakes and four seas
Good wine on stage
intoxicated three friends and six aunts
they were sworn followers and relatives

In the graceful mountains and rivers
the gorgeous rosy clouds direct to sightsee the beautis dancing
In the beautiful landscape
the lively willows in bud joyful to see the red plums reported news of spring

12/21/2019格律体新诗 ● 十四绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Fourteen Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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The 9,227th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-12-28 11:51 | 显示全部楼层
梦里梦外

气爽秋高,枫林尽染红颜色
风轻云淡,梅苑频添白雪容
温馨浪漫,梦里桃花依旧好
落寞惆怅,醒时故事已然空


Dream Outside Dream

Fresh autumn weather
the maple forest was dyed red
The plum garden frequent addition of the white snow
the clouds were faint
the wind was light

Lonely melancholy
woke up
the story was empty
Warm and romantic
in the dream
the peach blossoms were still fine

12/27/2019格律体新诗 ● 十一绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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The 9,251th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2020-3-15 17:15 | 显示全部楼层
凜然的氣節

小雪飄舞蒼穹,寒風拂面,正值隆冬時節,詩懷澎湃
青松聳居峻嶺,冷雨澆身,當逢極地氣溫,傲骨凜然
霧思鎖江有意,素瘴銀波,逍遙俊傑烈忠,千古典範
風欲梳柳無言,蘭心錦瑟,豆蔻青春甘貴,一生情緣

注:第一四句羅志海作,第二三句錢永德作。


Awe Inspiring Moral Integrity

The small snow is flying in the sky
the cold wind is blowing on my face
it's in the middle of winter
my poetry mind is surging

The green pines are towering over the steep mountains
the cold rain is pouring on them
when it’s the temperature of the polar region
they are proud and awe inspiring

Fog thinks to lock the river deliberately
white miasma and silver waves
free and unfettered outstanding talents and faithful martyrs
they are eternal paradigms

The wind wants to comb the willows without words
the orchid heart and the beautiful se
the nutmeg youth is sweet and valuable
the love of a life

Note: first and second sentences by Luo Zhihai.

Note: first and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.
Second and third sentences by Qian Yongde.

3/14/2020格律體新詩 ● 二十絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Twenty Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9667首對聯體詩
The 9,667th Two Pairs of Couplets

後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則(草稿)》
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html寫作,每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(絕句),是一種格律體新詩。目前國內有幾十位詩人參與創作。
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-3-15 17:46 | 显示全部楼层
踏春之作

花影景深,嗟往還思鳥倚聲之作
心光明媚,與三五摯朋攜伴而行
疏狂放逸,一家春格調厚情逐弄
俊美輕靈,千里馬風姿昂首嘶鳴

注:第一三句葉葉新作,第二四句羅志海作。


The Work Going On A Spring Outing

The shadows of flowers is deep
I think about the work of birds leaning on the sound
and sigh going and coming
The light of hearts are bright and beautiful
I with three or five sincere friends
accompany by company

Unrestrained and leisurely
style of a family spring with thick emotions to pursue
Handsome, light and spirited
graceful bearing of a thousand mile horse raises it's head and neighing


Note: first and third sentences by Ye Yexin.
Second and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.

3/14/2020格律體新詩 ● 十三絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Thirteen Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9668首對聯體詩
The 9,668th Two Pairs of Couplets

後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則(草稿)》
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html寫作,每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(絕句),是一種格律體新詩。目前國內有幾十位詩人參與創作。
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-17 08:26 | 显示全部楼层
唱吟

盏里清茶堪解味
苑中明月是知音
溪流一谷任君唱
春色满园由我吟


Sing And Chant

The bright moon in the court is my bosom friend
The green tea in the cup can be delicious
You can sing a valley of the stream
I can chant the whole garden of the spring colors

4/16/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9895首对联体诗
The 9,895th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/surmise-from-reason/#content
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-17 20:28 | 显示全部楼层
心花怒放

山河聚义,理想飞天,同圆好梦仙韶曲
岁月无情,人生有爱,绽放青春吉庆花
秋意清凉,善良颜色,白玉兰洁如皎月
夏心火热,优美姿容,红玫瑰灿若云霞


The Heart Flowers In Full Bloom

The mountains and rivers gather loyalty
the ideal flies to the sky
together interpret a good dream
the immortal music
Years are merciless
life has love
blooming the auspicious flowers of youth

The heart of summer is hot
the graceful appearance
the red rose looks like the cloud
The autumn mood is cool
the color of goodness
the white magnolia is as clean as the moon

4/17/2020格律体新诗 ● 十五绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Fifteen Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9901首对联体诗
The 9,901th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-life-of-vitality/#content
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-25 17:53 | 显示全部楼层
品味除愁

水际烟笼遮晚照
山头雾锁醉清秋
何人能品诗中味
闷酒怎除心上愁


Appreciate The Taste And Get Rid Of The Worries
 
In the end of the water, smoke envelops and covers the setting sun
In the mountain ridge, fog locks and intoxicates the clear autumn
Who can appreciate the taste of poetry?
How can I get rid of my worries by drinking?

4/25/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9953首对联体诗
The 9,953th Two Pairs of Couplets
后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/bright-sunny-sky/#content
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-25 19:59 | 显示全部楼层
忧伤快乐

感怀切切,独把花锄偷洒泪
思念深深,空题诗帕暗伤神
烟雾迷茫,岳阳楼上谈忧乐
风云变幻,铜雀台中笑古今


Sadness And Happiness

With deep feelings
she held a hoe alone and shed tears
Missing deeply
she wrote a poem on a handkerchief and secretly hurt the spirit

Smoke was confused
we talked about sadness and happiness
in the Yueyang Tower
Changes in the wind and the clouds
we laughed the ancient and modern times
in the Tongque Terrace

4/25/2020格律体新诗 ● 十一绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9954首对联体诗
The 9,954th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... allbladder/#content
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
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