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 楼主| 发表于 2019-12-19 05:58 | 显示全部楼层
感人的遺言

我將逝世,請詩友們勿要為我悲傷哭泣
君有遺言,談對聯體應能替君光大發揚
聚短離長,過往曾記幾多聚離淚眼互對
恩高義重,今生定償不盡恩義真情難忘

注:第一四句羅志海作,第二三句Kenobiwan作。


Touching Last Word

You have a last word
talking about Two Pairs of Couplets
we can carry them forward for you
I will die
my poetry friends for me
please need not sadly cry!

Short time to gather together and long time to leave
once we remembered how much gathering and leaving
our tearful eyes saw each other in the past
Your grace and personal loyalty are high and heavy
I must not repay your grace and personal loyalty
your true feeling difficult to be forgotten this life


Note: first and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.
Second and third sentences by Kenobiwan.


12/18/2019格律體新詩 ● 十六絕 羅志海譯
Metric New Poetry ● Sixteen Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第9214首對聯體詩
The 9, 214th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-12-26 09:47 | 显示全部楼层
再度風光  

飄搖瀟灑,雲心一點隨風去
超脫喧嘩,雨意三分伴月來
喜上心頭,承繼國學弄筆墨
春回大地,弘揚傳統顯情懷


Prosperous Scene Again

Beyond the noise
three points of rain comes with the moon
Drifting, elegant and unconventional
a piece of cloud heart goes with wind

Happy heart
inheriting Chinese learning and writing with ink
Spring returns to the earth
carrying forward the tradition and showing feelings

12/25/2019格律體新詩 ● 十一絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9240首對聯體詩
The 9,240th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-12-30 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
我和你

夜色流風,浮雲柳下沾花醉
月光瀉韻,棲鳥林藏尋境幽
聲情並茂,只要君諸事勝意
夙願已償,有了你一生何求

注:第一三句ty_風雲乍變作,第二四句羅志海作。


I And You

The flowing wind at dark night
the floating clouds under the willow are drunk after touching flowers
The moonlight pouring out rhymes
to seek the secluded place
habitat birds hide in the forest

Long cherished wish has been fulfilled
having you
what else does my life require?
You have both voice and emotion
as long as you win everything


Note: first and third sentences by Ty_Fengyunzhabian.
Second and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.


12/29/2019格律體新詩 ● 十一絕 羅志海譯
Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第9264首對聯體詩
The 9,264th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-8 18:22 | 显示全部楼层



我將登月騰聖境,妙曲常聽品玉液
君欲絕塵棄人間,伊魂永伴遊黃泉
落筆生輝夢婀娜,互幫互助真朋友
稱心如意天作合,相愛相親是美緣

注:第一四句錢永德作,第二三句羅志海作。


Relationship

I will go to the moon to jump on the Holy Land
and will often listen to the wonderful music and drink the jade wine
You want to get rid of the dust and abandon the world
his soul will travel netherworld with you forever

Writing makes a dream graceful
we are true friends
help each other
It's a perfect match
it's a beautiful relationship
love each other


Note: first and fourth sentences by Qian Yongde.
Second and third sentences by Luo Zhihai.

4/8/2020格律體新詩 ● 十四絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Fourteen Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9858首對聯體詩
The 9,858th Two Pairs of Couplets

後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則(草稿)》寫作,每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(絕句),是一種格律體新詩。目前國內已有幾十位詩人參與創作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-guest-from-afar/#content
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发表于 2020-4-9 20:33 | 显示全部楼层
佳作提起复赏,作品蕴意雅致,诗味浓郁,逸韵悠长!顺致创作愉快!
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-10 20:27 | 显示全部楼层
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佳作提起复赏,作品蕴意雅致,诗味浓郁,逸韵悠长!顺致创作愉快!

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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-10 20:30 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 罗志海 于 2021-2-5 02:44 编辑

修養

拾趣山嵐間,沾衣月色桂香味
放晴風雨後,入眼湖光水墨痕
危峰多妙境,詩寫好清新脫俗
茅舍養清心,道修成返璞歸真


Training And Cultivation

Sunny after wind and rain
Eyeful lake light with the ink marks
Pick up the interest in the mountain haze
the moonlight dipping on the clothes with fragrance of Osmanthus

There is wonderful scenery in the dangerous peaks
write a poem being fresh and refined
The cottage keeps the heart clear
and the cultivation of Tao returns to the nature

4/10/2020格律體新詩 ● 十二絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Twelve Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9866首對聯體詩
The 9,866th Two Pairs of Couplets

後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則(草稿)》寫作,每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(絕句),是一種格律體新詩。目前國內已有幾十位詩人參與創作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/dusk-crows/#content
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-21 09:57 | 显示全部楼层
领悟  

月渡清江湿脚
风萦柳岸撩人
红尘有谁悟透
今世惟我求真


Understand

Moon crossed the Clear River and wetted its feet
The wind haunted the willow bank to tease guys
Who can understand the red dust?
I'm the only one to seek true in this life

4/20/2020格律體新詩 ● 六絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Six Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9926首對聯體詩
The 9,926th Two Pairs of Couplets
後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則(草稿)》寫作,每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(絕句),是一種格律體新詩。目前國內已有幾十位詩人參與創作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/years-are-slow/#content
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
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